Explanation
This is a poem. The main conflict of this poem is that a couple as broken up. The character is very sad. This showcases my theme because someone was in love and became sad. “It cut so deep into me, I guess it hurt you too but when you did it, then you laid me had to say [we're through.]" This quote directly relates to my theme because it describes the character in an emotional break down because she loved the boy, but they broke up, now she is in deep pain.
It
cut so deep into me
I guess it hurt you too
but when you did it, then you
lied
I had to say "we're through."
I gave you all I had
I tried to
make it last
but now all we have
are memories from the past.
So
look me in the eye
and tell me what you see
a girl so broke inside
who's been through misery.
And now I’m moving on
with the pain that
kills inside
but I’m starting to forget
by
reminding myself, how you lied!
I have somebody new
someone to treat
me right,
to talk to lovingly
and to hold me all night.
He's there
for me when I need him
to give me love and support
to hold me close and
wipe away
all my signs of hurt.
To kiss me softly every night
and
let me know he's there
to call me just because,
just to tell me that he
cares.
Now here I go again
fallen so hard, so deep
but this time
it's different,
this is one I want to keep!
cut so deep into me
I guess it hurt you too
but when you did it, then you
lied
I had to say "we're through."
I gave you all I had
I tried to
make it last
but now all we have
are memories from the past.
So
look me in the eye
and tell me what you see
a girl so broke inside
who's been through misery.
And now I’m moving on
with the pain that
kills inside
but I’m starting to forget
by
reminding myself, how you lied!
I have somebody new
someone to treat
me right,
to talk to lovingly
and to hold me all night.
He's there
for me when I need him
to give me love and support
to hold me close and
wipe away
all my signs of hurt.
To kiss me softly every night
and
let me know he's there
to call me just because,
just to tell me that he
cares.
Now here I go again
fallen so hard, so deep
but this time
it's different,
this is one I want to keep!